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Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives?

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A society has been living in the
technology
Suggestion
technological
 progress time, thereby one part thinks customs hinder evolution and should be forgotten,
however
, another one have the opposite view. In my perspective traditions are cultural heritage of ancestors and forget it means forget history our nation;
additionally
, innovation can modify customs for new trend without any resistance.
Firstly
, people cannot decline the fact what traditions with us always accompany our history;
nevertheless
, sometimes new customs appear on base old ones as trend new time.
Moreover
, all traditions play roles in life of the nation make it unique among other.
For example
, each nation has various traditional festivals unique for every single country.
In addition
, people, presently, tend to renew memories about the past habits, thereby most popular for tourism, ancient place
such
 as the castle in the European countries there demonstrate customs ancients people and their holidays.
Although
, with changes in
technology
 some traditions modifying because having less practical to implement.
For instance
, in the past people used to write letters by feather and sent through post, now they make email and send it online.
Besides
, some people, especially the older generation, do not want use new
technology
 because prefers old ones as traditions.
Furthermore
, in rural people habits to use old tools for harvesting that not effective as newer ones.
Consequently
, the part of the tradition that touching
technology
 people can or modifying, because people still write letters and some more important send by courier, or forget, like the feathers for reason uselessness. To conclude, I strongly disagree to forget the traditions for progress because they build us, and we always can adopt habits to new trends.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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