Some people think that to produce a happier society is to ensure that there is only a small difference on the earnings of the richest and the poorest members. To what extent to do you agree or disagree?
There is a believe in a group of people that the happier society can be achieved with a small
difference
in the salary between rich and poor people. I strongly agree with this
thought.
To begin
with the causes which can happen with the major differences in earning between wealthier and poor
people. One of them is unstable community. Suggestion
poorer
In other words
, with the huge variation in salary, wealthy people will become more wealthy
and poor will face more poverty. Suggestion
wealthier
For example
, in Nigeria, there are three groups of people; wealthier, poorer and mafia in the society. The result of this
, bad people will follow wrong way to earn high money and the crime ratio will increase. Another reason is a social criseas
. Major an unstable situation of extreme danger or difficulty
crisis
difference
in income will create differences between people at work place, within neighbours and society. Thus
, people will not treat eachother
equally.
Suggestion
each other
At
the other side, there are several benefits from the low Suggestion
On
difference
in earning. Firstly
, it helps people to survive with the basic needs, such
as accommodation, food and clothes. This
way, poor people can also
eat in the good
restaurant with family. Suggestion
the best
For instance
, five star level restuarant
. a building where people go to eat
restaurant
Secondly
, human will understand the importance of humanity instead
of focusing on only earning. To clarify this
, with the small difference
in the wages, people will face less crticism
, and will start to respect each other. disapproval expressed by pointing out faults or shortcomings
criticism
Finally
, the crime ratio will decrease. As every other person will be at more or less same level
of financial status, Suggestion
the same level
every one
will feel satisfied with the work.
In conclusion, while there are several disadvantages of high fluctuation in salary, all people
everyone
such
as unreliable community and social differences, there are a number of benefits to the minimum difference
in income, such
as availability of basic necessity, equal respect for eachother
and low crime. Suggestion
each other
Thus
, It is proven that the government can establish a rule of small difference
in income to create happier community.Submitted by Ishaan433 on
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