Write a letter to your landlord about an increase in rent that you don't think is justified. In your letter say: - Why you are writing - What the problems are - What you want the landlord to do

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Dear Mr John, I am writing

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email concerning the increase in rent that you have mentioned in the lease agreement which I am not feeling justified. Please allow me to explain. you have asked for an increase of $200 from the month of June. I don't mind paying

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amount,

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, there are a few problems which must be addressed before I renew

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contract.

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, I have already informed you that the heating system is not working properly in the bedroom and we are using a portable heater which is not very convenient.

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, the kitchen tap is still leaking even though we reported you multiple times, it has not been resolved.

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, the broken windows in the master bedroom should be replaced as it was damaged by you

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fitting lights

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month. I would be grateful if you could resolve all these issues as early as possible,

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I don't have any issues signing the lease agreement with the increase that you have mentioned. I look forward to your response at your earliest convenience. Thank you. yours faithfully, Jee

Submitted by jeeanay on Mon Dec 04 2023

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greeting and closing

Ensure proper use of formal salutations and closings in your letter to maintain a consistent level of formality throughout the correspondence.

logical structure

Maintain a clear and logical flow of ideas, using appropriate paragraphing to separate different points for better clarity.

single idea per paragraph

Each paragraph should focus on a single issue or idea to prevent confusion and enhance the clarity of your message.

complete response

Ensure that you fully address all parts of the task, providing relevant examples and specific requests or suggestions where appropriate.

suitable writing tone

Maintain a formal and polite tone throughout your letter, even when making complaints or requesting actions from your landlord. Use formal language and polite expressions to convey your requests professionally.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

184 words

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