Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Agree or disagree.

It's modern technology people think it is more important to spend money on road and motorways than on
public
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the public transport system
transport
system.
people
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People
are now educational well known about public
transport
,
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,
most of people recommend to travel own vehicle
inspite
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in spite
of using
public
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public transport services
transport
service
,
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,
now days people are don't stuck in traffic congestion its was
horrible situation
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a horrible situation
and circumstances,
moreover
people want to invest own vehicles rather than spending in public
transport
.Its very easy channel mode of
transport
people
are traveling
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is travelling
are travelling
on
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in
a
rusy
reflecting optimism
rosy
racy
way at
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an
emergency work
,
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,
therefore
they reached on
particular distination
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a particular destination
particular destination
particular destinations
particular distinction
.
public
not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole
Public
transport
just like busses
,
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,
metro railway and car which was inconvenience sufficient to get in
time
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time, however
however
government
also
make on main
station catch
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station, catch
up public
transport
service
,
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,
most of
time
difficulty to travel on a long way to take public
transport
,
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,
In case any road strike is happen unable to attend any circumstances
,
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,
on the other hand
people believe
transport
as much as better than own motorways
,
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,
motor vehicle are faster reach out own
distination
the place designated as the end (as of a race or journey)
destination
destinations
distinction
,
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,
sometimes
transport
block or jam.
motorways
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Motorways
give us chance opportunities to make faster
way despite
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way, despite
some of
narrow wide
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narrow, wide
area
devolepment
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development, transport
development transport
transport
available at
thier
of them or themselves
their
leisure
time
.
motorways
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Motorways
are make
smootest
having a surface free from roughness or bumps or ridges or irregularities
smoothest
ride in
road it's
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road, it's
give
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given
easy access to any area.
somtimes
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Sometimes
Somtimes
public
transport
also
for
easy
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ease
easiness
of
communication but
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communication, but
stuck
on
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in
traffic congestion its take
whole Rest
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a whole Rest
of life during working hours
,
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,
so public
transport
recommendations only for certain
time
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time, however
however
people are spending vehicle which moves much faster than public
transport
they do not hesitate or frustrated during working channel of communication
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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