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currently many people fail to balance the work with the other parts of lives, what are the reasons and how to solve it?

#people #balance #work #parts #lives
So here we have to discuss between work and other parts of human
life
, like how to maintain a healthy boundary between these two things so that they don't cross with each other. So here I will be talking about possible reasons for giving too much
time
 to one part of
life
 at the expense of loosing
time
 for other important activities,
likewise
 we can see with the demanding industries in our world most of the people are devoted to that and after finishing that they don't have much left in them to invest their
time
 in other things. So lets take an example of
this
, like as mentioned and with the growing demand for money and with the inflation, earning more money has become the priority of everyone's
life
 and they want to devote themselves,
their
Suggestion
they're
there
 in order to have a good lifestyle and
also
 to impress others,
also
this
 social media era proven to have a significant effect on people where people usually compare their
life
 with each other and they end up loosing the sight of what is more important to them. So what should be the remedy of
this
, people need to be aware the important essence of everything in their
life
 and not to devote all the
time
 to one thing because having a fine line between things is the ultimate solution.And taking care of family and health is as important as taking care of one's income and if people are very affluent but don't have other things in
life
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 even that proves to be nothing.
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