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Some people think that the development of technology helps to reduce crime, while other people think that it encourages crime. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Technological developments are increasing
with
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by
in
 leaps and bounds. It is commonly considered by many that the enhancements in
technology
has reduced
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have reduced
 the
crime
rate
.
However
, others tend to oppose
this
 idea and believe that
technology
 has given birth to cyber
crime
. In my opinion,
technology
 has played a significant role in minimizing the
crime
 at public places. On the one hand, some people hold a firm belief that innovation in
technology
 has reduced the number of
crime
 incidents in recent years. The reason being, almost every single place is equipped with
security
 cameras and
therefore
 burglars have to very carefully and consider all outcomes, before attempting any theft and robbery, resulting in
reduction
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a reduction
 in the
crime
rate
.
For Instance
, according to the Times of India the
crime
rate
 in banks has reduced
to
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by
 half due to
security
 camera’s installation and real-time video recording of all the visitors.
Thus
, wise use of
security
 gadgets has minimised the
crime
 to a great extent.
On the other hand
, those who are against the
technology
, believes that the advancements in
technology
has encouraged
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have encouraged
 people to commit
crime
.
In other words
, scammers with
wide range
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a wide range
 of knowledge about online fraud can easily fool old age people by falsifying their identify and blackmailing for money in return. To exemplify,
GeekSquad
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Geek Squad
, the tech support company in Canada, says that its 80% customers who visit stores for laptop repair have already been scammed and are looking for solutions. To conclude,
although
 some people believe that the innovation in
technology
 has increased the online
crime
such
 as bank theft and cyber fraud.
However
, I believe
security
 cameras has reduced the
crime
rate
 at public places.
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