you recently received a letter fron you bank that should have contained a new credit card. Unfortunately, the card was not in the letter. Write a letter to your bank manager. I your letter, Explain what has happened suggest the credit card should be cancelled for security reasons ask when a new credit card can be sent to you.
Dear Manager,
Trust
this
letter
meets you well?
I am writing to inform you that I have received the Change the punctuation
.
letter
with
regarding the verification of my new credit Change preposition
apply
card
. I truly appreciate the effort the bank put into getting it across to me, quite effective.
However
, upon opening the letter
, the card
was not contained in the package and this
is quite disheartening as I have waited for two months to get it. I fear that someone might have tampered with it before sending it out.
Due to
the inability to confirm the exact reason for this
, I strongly recommend that the card
is
cancelled to prevent any form of fraud on my account and that I get a new Correct subject-verb agreement
be
card
sent to my location.
I would appreciate if
you Correct pronoun usage
it if
can
respond to Wrong verb form
could
this
letter
giving more clarity on the situation and also
letting me know the new date when I can get a new card
transferred to me for my use.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Veronica.Submitted by igboekwevera on
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greeting and closing
Ensure that the greeting is formal and appropriate for the context of writing to a bank manager. Utilizing 'Dear Bank Manager' would be more suitable than 'Dear Manager' in this scenario.
task achievement
Maintain a formal tone throughout the letter. Phrases such as 'Trust this letter meets you well?' are informal and better suited for personal correspondence, not a letter to a bank manager.
task achievement
The explanation about the missing credit card could be more concise. Avoid unnecessary flattery or commentary about the bank's effort in order to maintain focus on the issue at hand.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a distinct point. Separate the explanation, suggestion, and question into individual paragraphs to enhance readability and coherence.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.