Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is an environmental
problem
. It is undeniable that losing particular species of plants and animals has become an essential
problem
of our
planet
.
However
, there is no absolute agreement
on
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with
others, whose say that we have issues that are
more significant
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most significant
in atmosphere. In
this
essay, I will examine both views and explain why I agree that humans have problems that are more current in
nature
than the loss particular species of flora and fauna. A commonly held belief is that the most valuable question is extinction some kind of animals and plants. As evidence of
this
they point to that,
nature
and our entire
planet
Earth compose from humanity, flora and fauna. Plants make our
air
fresh and clean. Some kind of herbs
help
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helps
us to be healthy.
Moreover
, without
animal’s
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animal
kingdom our
planet
will be empty, due to the fact that animals are a living organism like humans.
Furthermore
, they help, support and protect us. To be more precise, according many researching and practical experiments, animals are helping blind people,
elder
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
persons, and
in particular
educate children to be more kind and humanity. Others,
however
, myself included, have
opinion
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the opinion
that there are more essential environmental tasks. The most important consideration is
air
, water and land pollution. In most cases, it is
result
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resulting
from unlimited using of natural resources.
Secondly
, cutting-edge people are using many things and
consequently
our
planet
is full with garbage, which harmed and lead to dying animals, fish and birds. The
third
important
problem
is global warming. Humans put to account
from
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for
nature
many benefits, but they do not pay attention about
aftermath
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the aftermath
. For the reason that it can cost an arm and a leg for
next generation
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the next generation
. People use every day techniques, waste
nature
energy without to
overthinking
how it is harmful
for
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to
surrounding
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the surrounding
. Admittedly, in
contemporary
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the contemporary
it is often to happen environmental disaster like fires, floods, earthquake, and hurricanes. A clear example of
this
is fire in Australia in
previous year
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previous years
the previous year
a previous year
in December, which lead to losing about 500 000 animals,
burnout
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burn out
the woods and plants,
pollution
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pollute
polluting
polluted
the
air
and water. In conclusion, I guess that humanity’s
first
vital
problem
should be all
nature
, entire our
planet
. If we will take care and safe our environment than
air
, water, people will safe and we would not loss of particular species of plants and animals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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