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Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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That is
 a common belief that
music
 is the best option of gathering human beings of various cultures and ages together. In my opinion, I completely agree with
this
 idea. Actually,
music
 is the best way of feeling happy or sometimes sad. It easily impacts to the people and changes their emotions.
Additionally
, it makes people to bring their culture together, not only as a person listens different kinds of musics of the several countries, but
also
 they adapt to
music
's origin (its country, singer, language, and so on.)
For example
, nowadays fans of the pop are a lot of in different states. As they love to listen Korean musics, they are
also
 really into to learn its language on account of their passion. As it is mentioned above, when someone has a great passion to listen one
music
, they want to search about a singer of that
music
 too. And they become to have idols of singers.
Moreover
, there exist some norms and cultures that even people don't want to cooperate with other nations. So, the
music
 is a good method for them to be cooperative and to share their feelings with each others.
Finally
, another reason for it can be said that there is no limit of ages that cannot listen to
music
, all human beings have a right to listen to a tune (from child to old.) Not only youngs listen to modern one, but
also
 some of them are really into to listen to old songs. In short, I believe that
music
 is the best opportunity to become cooperative with other nations and it is a good way of sharing our sensations as well.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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