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With easier access to the internet, many students are turning to online sources to study instead of libraries.

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Nowadays, technological developments are ubiquitous and these devices can be used in some ambiances in terms of entering online resources.
Nevertheless
, people can face some negative effects because of the technologies. In
this
 essay, the causes of
this
 trend will be analysed with some practical solution to deal with the problem. The main reason why individuals more prefer to use online materials than visiting libraries is that it gives people instant and boundless access to huge storage of information on almost any subject.
However
, in libraries, readers can merely use a limited number of books and other materials. In other word, in some ambiances people cannot find enough resources in libraries to cover all aspects of their researches or interests.
Furthermore
, in order to flag up
this
 issuing, government and others who rest with
this
 subject, can provide libraries with a greater range of book facilities to make more accessible sources for all people.
In addition
, it is obvious that the high speed of internet makes it possible to find a great f of information from different websites and during less time. In other word, to go libraries can become more time-consuming,
therefore
, people try to take advantage of the internet in terms of saving time. In order to tackle the problem, government can take some steps
such
 as to apply delivering system for libraries.
This
 system will help people to book the materials from, at home and without going somewhere.
Moreover
, libraries can organize some campaigns and other incentives to attract the attention of people to visit libraries. In conclusion, it is evident that
although
 internet plays an intrinsic role in our lives, governments can shoulder the responsibility to make people more enthusiastic about spending time for in libraries.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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