Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others. however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Many people consider that parents have the responsibility to teach children the duties of respectable members of society while other individuals think that
school
should perform the duty of teaching and training to be good citizens. There are strong arguments
in
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on
from
both
sides of the issue.
This
essay will discuss
both
sides of the issue thoroughly and provide concluding remarks.
First
, I would like to start by taking a closer look at the duty of family on
this
matter. Not only family is an economic unit responsible for the
fooding
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Fooding
feeding
funding
, lodging, health and other supportive measures necessary for a
child
's growth, but
also
family provide children's education
both
formally and informally.
For
example
, in under-developed and rural countries families plays a larger part in
this
matter.
Moreover
, children mostly learn from watching and imitating their parents and other member of the family forming the source of intuitive
learning creating
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learning, creating
habits and other core character traits which are the most difficult things to un-learn for a human being.
For instance
, if a little
child
has
saw
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seen
her parents to quarrel for every simplest matter,
this
will create a negative impact on her that she might not able to solve problem diplomatically in her later
life
.
Finally
,
parents especially
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parents, especially
mother often teaches morality, integrity and taking care of others by
story-telling
The act or practice of telling stories
storytelling
. These nice little
story
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stories
will leave a
foot-print
a mark of a foot or shoe on a surface
footprint
in these early minds that will be difficult to erase.
On the other hand
, early
school
is the place for teaching discipline and morality as we all think. Take some private
school
in Europe for an
example
, these
school
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schools
keep their pupil in line for different services
intentionally
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intended
to teach them the value of a
que
characterized by an absence or near absence of agitation or activity
quiet
.
Furthermore
, early
school
is the place where little one's
learn
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learning
the social
life
. If we consider group sport like football as an
example
, these kind of games actually teaches the children the value of team spirit.
Lastly
, sometime little children take their teachers as role model and follows them and learn good behaviour and habit from them. In conclusion, parents
has
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have
both
greater opportunity and responsibility of teaching their children to be a good citizens as they can teach them from the earliest part of
child's
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the child's life
a child's life
life
and can teach informally through stories.
Although
early
school
teachers can have great impact on a
child
's
life
, parents can do something
that is
very difficult for a teacher to achieve,
that is
teaching by creating
example
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an example
examples
the example
.
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  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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