University students are increasingly studying abroad as a part of thier studies.do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

Yes Now a
days every
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day, every
day every
student has a dream after completing his
graduation he
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graduation, he
will go abroad for higher
studies it
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studies, it
is the common scenario for maximum students.
This
day I am going to talk about the advantages of higher studies. In my country Bangladesh which is very small and it is developed
county
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
at all.
This
county
provide
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provides
standard education in graduate program University level, but students are facing problem after completing their graduation when they enter into a
job
.Its very challenging for them
,
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,
the education which they learnt from University did not match in their Professional life after that they feel insecure in
thier
of them or themselves
their
own profession.After
that students
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that, students
want to get
higher
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a higher degree
degree
from abroad.Many students
also
follow their seniors who got
higher
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a higher degree
degree
from abroad and now they run their own business successfully, graduate students think if they acquire any higher
degree
from abroad they can be a successful
businessmen
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businessman
.After going
abroad many
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abroad, many
senior brothers obtain more
degree
and
setteled
established or decided beyond dispute or doubt
settled
themselves in abroad by taking
attractive
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an attractive job
job
with smart salary.
This
job
and salary
attracts
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attract
our current students and they eagerly wanted to go abroad. For getting higher
degree
going to abroad it has some disadvantages
also
.Many students go abroad for getting
higher
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a higher degree
higher degrees
degree
after leaving
attractive
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an attractive job
job
in his own country.He
want
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wants
more than
enough but
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enough, but
for
acquaring
the act of acquiring something
acquiring
higher
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a higher degree, he
a higher degree he
degree
he lost three or four years from his
job
experience.After getting higher
degree
the
studen
a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
student
returned to his own
county
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
and try to manage better
job but
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job, but
he failed to manage
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
he repent and feel worthless.The students think
not going
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isn't going
to abroad if he continued his previous
job
he would get
promotion
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a promotion
and salary
also
then
he felt repent. But for my opinion for obtaining
higher
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a higher degree
higher degrees
degree
from abroad maximum time bring success so we should try to obtain more
degree
from abroad.Because the curriculum of study abroad is best.

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