The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given chart illustrates the number of students who take part
of
5 different leisure activities. Change preposition
in
Overall
, we can say that
Change the determiner
that boy
those boys
boys
took the majority of these activities.
It is clear that
the most popular leisure activity among this
age group is watching television almost all children in Australia watch tv in their free time, However
in Add a comma
,However
the
three of the four other activities, Correct article usage
apply
Boys
participation was significantly greater than Change noun form
Boys'
Boy's
girls
.
The next
most popular activity is playing computer games with 80% of the boys
and 60% of the girls
, bike riding follows computer games in terms of popularity, just under three quarters
of Add a hyphen
three-quarters
boys
say they like cycling and just under two thirds
Add a hyphen
two-thirds
girls
say so, The only activity which Change preposition
of girls
girls
chose more than boys
is Art and craft with just over 50 per cent of girls
like to draw compared to only about 40 per cent of boys
.
The figures are showing that the
Correct article usage
apply
boys
being
more active and Wrong verb form
are
girls
more
creative in Australia.Add a missing verb
are more
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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