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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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carbon
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the carbon
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 dioxide
emissions
one
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 person in
the
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four
difference
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 European countries from 1967 to 2007. In general, we can see that carbon dioxide
emissions
 were noticed the most in Great Britain in 1967.
Furthermore
, CO2
emissions
 were polluted the least in Portugal in 1967.
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 with the UK, we can view that
although
 in 1967 Carbon dioxide
emissions
 were 11 metric
tonnes
afterward
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these
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 huge number was decreased by
attempt
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 of
government
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 till 2007. (under 10 metric
tonnes
).
In addition
 , we can
also
 observe that CO2
emissions
were
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rose to
peak
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 point in Sweden in 1987
however
 pollution was reduced until 2007 from over 10 metric
tonnes
 to under 6 metric
tonnes
. Moving on to the CO2
emissions
 results of Italy , we can witness that Italian governments cannot prevent increasing these
type
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 of
toxics
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toxins
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 so they went up slowly from 4 metric
tonnes
 to 7 metric
tonnes
 between 1967 and 2007.
Next
 , when it comes to Portugal , it is
also
 worth noting that CO2
emissions
also
 grew rapidly
since
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 1 metric
tonnes
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tonne
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till
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to
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 5 metric
tonnes
 from 1987 to 2007.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, co, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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