Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree ?

The use of elastic shopping bags has aroused a lot of argument. While a certain number of people believe that
molded
shaped to fit by or as if by altering the contours of a pliable mass (as by work or effort)
moulded
bags adds to the pollution of soil and sea, others hold another opinion about it.
This
essay completely agree that elastic shopping bags should be banned. On the one hand, it's been quite understandable that a given number of people support the use of
molded
shaped to fit by or as if by altering the contours of a pliable mass (as by work or effort)
moulded
bag because it's believed to be strong and can carry heavy goods without breaking. For Instance, in a recent survey carried out
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establish or strengthen as with new evidence or facts
confirm
the use elastic shopping bags, it revealed that
molded
shaped to fit by or as if by altering the contours of a pliable mass (as by work or effort)
moulded
bags are strong and spacious to carry all goods at once. On a flip side, I completely agree with people who believe that elastic shopping bags constitute a major pollutant to soil and water, The bags
areusually
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are usually
disposed everywhere, in the water they could be digested by fishes and can lead to extinction of fishes. On
field
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the field
, every gutter has a lot of
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shaped to fit by or as if by altering the contours of a pliable mass (as by work or effort)
moulded
bags in it as
such
blocking drainages, resulting in erosion when it rains.
In addition
, the elastic bags could be recycled and be made into something else. In summary, I completely agree that elastic shopping bags cause a major pollution to soil and water. It should be banned for being used.

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