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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Long-term survival
  • Scientific understanding
  • Technological advances
  • Earthly benefits
  • Pressing issues
  • Climate change
  • STEM fields (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics)
  • Balanced approach
  • Geopolitical stability
  • Space exploration
  • Space research
  • International cooperation
  • Priority
  • Immediate issues
  • Global challenges
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