Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city - Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city

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Dear Avinash, Hope you are doing well. It's been ages

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met. I got to know through our mutual friend Rani that you have shifted to Seattle. When you were in India, we could easily meet and discuss things. But since changed my job and moved to Delhi, my schedule completely changed and we lost touch. Actually, I am travelling to Seattle for a conference. It is a

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seminar on " "Social Media Marketing" from 1st to 7th, March. I was thinking of extending

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trip because I want to spend time with you. I have heard that Seattle is a calm and beautiful place.

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, visit some really interesting places like the Space Needle, Museum of Pop Culture, Chihuly Garden and Glass and many more other places. I am not sure about your work routine and availability. Once you receive

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letter, kindly feel free to discuss the itinerary of

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trip.

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, I wanted to know if I could stay with you during the visit, else I can book a hotel

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your convenience. Once you confirm about

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trip,

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I will book tickets. Best wishes, Shreya

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

195 words

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