Write a letter to the local council about the problem of the road near your house Explain where you live Describe the problem Explain what you want him to do

Dear sir or Madam, I am writing in regards to the improper road in our area. The roadway in Abbey has been damaged by the recent natural calamity. Since

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the people in our region are extremely suffering. We need your immediate attention to

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matter. Let me introduce myself, my name is Peter Kavinsky I have been living in Abbey for

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7 years. I have never faced any issues before with the local council. There are total

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flats in our area with almost 500 citizens. We all use the Abbey Highway to connect to the mainland. The problem began two months before just after the floods.

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flood has severely affected our roadway generating several difficulties. We were not able to take

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path since the flooding.

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, there is a huge pothole near my house which is causing major accidents to occur. So I kindly request you to take serious measures to reconstruct

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lane at once. I

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ask you to close the potholes to avoid

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traumatic events. Kind Regards Peter Kavinsky

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Apr 1, 2020

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