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Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people's health, more and more people are eating it. Why are most people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?

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People nowadays prefer to eat fast
food
 than home made
food
 due to the easy availability and taste. Though, it directly affects on our body, but still people like to have junk
food
 than a health
food
. We often get very less time for making the
food
 at our home and devotes that time in the work. Everyone wants to achieve better in their life so, they like to give time to their ambition and have their lunch or dinner from the nearest stores available. Having fast
food
 on a regular basis results in many types of diseases
such
 as over-weight, bad digestion, stomach pain and even leads to cancer. People like the taste of
such
 type
food
 and even the quality and loves to explore more and more similar type of
food
. The main reason for having junk
food
 is the taste and easy availability of it everywhere. People even now can order
food
 online though, they know it is not good for health, but, still they prefer to have it.
Lastly
, many things can be done to reduce consumption of
such
 type
food
 by making healthy more available to the people than junk
food
. In India, there are several companies who provide home cooked healthy
food
 to the employees who came to another state or region and prefer to have
food
 from outside as they are not well trained in making the
food
 by their own. Other countries should start
such
 companies and provide healthy
food
 to the people.
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