Some experts, believe that it’s better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school do it advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage
Nowadays, learning a new
language
for children has become one of the most argued issues. While
many people believe that the introduction of a new language
should be in the early stages of education, many others argue that it should be delayed to secondary classes. I believe there are significant benefits to early learning of foreign languages with only a few minor drawbacks.
On the one hand, learning at a young age is much easier and convenient than older age. Children are more able to learn any new language
as their brains try to imitate their surroundings.Moreover
, children are not only inquisitive, but also
easy to be guided which makes them more affected by their teachers . For example
, research conducted at Harvard University in 2010, showed that young students
have the ability to learn more than two languages at the same time in comparison to older-age students
. Additionally
, curriculums of the early learning stages are more flexible and provide time to practice a new language
, which enhances the capability of learning.
On the other hand
, Ther are some disadvantages of early linguistic learning. Firstly
,not all primary schools are well prepared to teach a new language
. For instance
, teachers may not have the right tools to teach young students
, who need specific amenities for learning. Secondly
, if young students
do not be encouraged by their families to learn a new language
, they will feel confused. Hence
, learning a new language
at this
young age needs also
attention from parents.
To conclude
, learning a new language
in primary school has numerous benefits; however
, it has some demerits. Teaching organizations have to take steps to overcome all obstacles to facilitate the path of learning for the young generation.Submitted by haderabouslema93 on
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