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Human society has made great technological progress in the last hundred years. Some people think this also has negative effects on our life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Scientists, and many other intelligent people have changed people's way of living by making
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 during the
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 century. But a part of the society considers
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 progress as a negative impact on human beings. I completely disagree with their opinion as modernisation has made our lives easy and faster.
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, I would like to highlight the benefits of having a modern communication system. With the improvement in communicating methods, people can connect with any person in the world from any corner of the world. These latest features of communication have made the world very small.
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, people can do their business more effectively and conveniently without doing physical travelling. Many people are arguing that
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 has made our soft skills weaken and have made people less introvert. But with the proper use, one can actually improve these skills from sources available online, and
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, with the introduction of smart innovations into day to day
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, people's
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life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
 has become more easy and efficient. Each and every person is relying on
technology
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.
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, smart phones have made tasks like banking, education, business and shopping on one touch.
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, with the use of smart cars and smart houses people are not only saving energies, but
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 saving their time and increasing their productivity with less effort.
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 pollution is the main concern, but with the
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 of
technology
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, more and more alternatives are being invented to make environment cleaner and healthier. In conclusion, some people are considering
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 progress of
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 as a disadvantage
for
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of
 human beings, but indeed,
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advancement
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 in
technology
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 has made our
life
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 easier and helping in our all daily routines.In my opinion, technological
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 has made our
life
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 more efficient and faster.

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