A friend of yours is thinking of going on a campus holiday for the first time this summer. He / She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follow: Dear….,

Dear David, Hope you are doing well. I came to know that you want to go on a campus holiday
this
summer and I am writing
this
letter to inform you about some advantages and disadvantages of
this
camp.
Firstly
, I know very well that it has been your dream to go camping since your childhood. I was so happy after listening to your wish.
Moreover
, I want to tell you that
Goa
Beach
is the best place for camping. You will get a chance to camp on the
beach
and enjoy the night view of the
Goa
. It would be a great experience for you as you can do many activities on
this
campsite
such
as bonfires, Barbeque and many more.
Nonetheless
, there are drawbacks to
this
camping. The local market is 6 kilometres far away from the
beach
.
Additionally
, there is no facility for transport from the
beach
thus
, you have to walk to purchase anything.
Furthermore
,
Goa
is a tourist place so the price of goods is high in local shops. I would like to join
this
trip with you because I am free
this
summer.
However
, It has been 8 years since I visited
Goa
. I will catch you before
this
trip. Yours Lovingly, Sophia.
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Ensure that your ideas are fully developed with supporting details to provide a more complete response.
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The letter has a warm and friendly tone, which is suitable for writing to a friend.
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The letter is well-structured with clear paragraphs, making it easy to follow.
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The greeting and closing are appropriate and add a personal touch to the letter.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tent
  • campfire
  • hiking
  • backpacking
  • campsite
  • wilderness
  • reconnect
  • tranquility
  • camping gear
  • outdoor activities
  • adventurous
  • survival skills
  • weather conditions
  • ecotourism
  • teamwork
  • star-gazing
  • marshmallows
  • wildlife
  • nature trails
  • sleeping bags
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