Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs. To what extent to do you agree?

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Nowadays, it is really easy for the people to travel various parts of the world.Some people believe that when people do their travelling, it is required to adjust for various types of cultures and norms where they are planning to move.I personally believe having the knowledge of different

culture

is important if we are planning visit

country

which has different

culture

and practices, but adapting to it is

culture

is purely depend on how long they are planning to stay there.

Firstly

, some people are planning to go another

country

to stay permanently,

hence

they need to familiar with new practices and norms.Unless, it is really difficult to survive there and hard to get contact with new people, not only the day to day life but

also

in the work place.

For instance

, in our

culture

we hug only the closest people, but in western countries they greet by hugging each others.

However

, there are some situations we are planning to visit another

country

for a few days

such

as trips and in

this

case it is not essential to adapt their

culture

and norms. Having the knowledge of their practices and

culture

is enough to visit there.

Last

year, I went to India with my family members and we visited many historical places and having the initial idea about their

culture

and history is helped to understand what the guide has explained about their history. To conclude, I can agree with

this

statement into some extent

hence

adapting to the local practices and customs is based on how long we stay in a new

country

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