Choose living in a vertical city or horizon city :

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Some people believe that it is convenient to live in residential
skyscappers
a very tall building with many stories
skyscrapers
while others think low-rise
city
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is a better place to settle down. Both of place may have its own benefit.
Personally I
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Personally, I
think high-rise building could bring more advantages in various aspects of life.
Firstly
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, living in vertical
city
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is convenient to inhabitant because it provides multiple
services
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service
utility. Many restaurants, shopping malls, schools,..
are
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Are
established
into
Suggestion
in
an area which help residential entertain without travelling far from home.
For example
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,
instead
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of waking up early, parents can have their own time since they easily take their children to school located nearly the building.
Secondly
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, a
city
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with skyscrapers can have more space and land for
pubic
not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole
public
useage
the act of using
usage
. It is characterised by high rise buildings can accommodate
large population
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the large population
large populations
a large population
on a small part of
land
Suggestion
the land
.
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Therefore government
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Therefore, government
would be able to use
this
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land to construct road
,
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,
park, supermarket,… to
enhace
increase
enhance
inhabitant’s life. People have more places to find new friends as well as do exercise.
For instance
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, the road could be widened to avoid traffic jams, reduce air pollution.
Lastly
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, safety in the apartment building is strictly guaranteed. Thanks to dozen of officers and security guards who hired to watch building carefully all day, dweller can
advoid
stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something
avoid
unwanted situation
such
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as thieves. A lots cameras were installed in the skyscraper to rigorous control people in and out.
For example
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, nowadays, almost
vertical
Suggestion
a vertical city
city
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use
Suggestion
uses
elevator card
Suggestion
an elevator card
which just allow inhabitant or officers move by lift. In conclusion, horizon
city
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may bring a lot of
advantages but
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advantages, but
I reckon vertical
city
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is more suitable for me.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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