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Some people believe that children should not be given homework everyday, while others believe that they must get homework everyday in order to be successful at school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is widely believed that after class assignment should not be given each day to
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 pupil, others consider it is necessary to have it daily so that children can become successful in
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. In my opinion, I believe it is necessary to have
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 to kids to catch-up with the lessons and at the same
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 it should not be burdened to them. In
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 essay, I will discuss both point of views, before putting forward why
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 is essential.
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 of all the very purpose of having
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 for students is to practise what they have done at
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. In the majority of schools there are a lot of student’s study in one particular class and many subjects are taught in one particular day. Not all children have the capacity to understand
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 topic what teachers are teaching. So it is important to have fixed
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 where they have sufficient
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 and they can practise with ease at home.
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, if there any doubt they can clarify with their parents and they are well aware of all the concepts which they are learning.
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Secondly if
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 there is no after class work for students, children may not take the lessons seriously. Most of the
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 children avoid reading or writing they often want to play after schools. In
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 cases, most of the
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 parents may not be aware how they are doing in schools or what’s being taught to them each day, whether they are facing any difficulty in understanding the subjects.
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 maths and science requires more practise mere theory session at
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 will not help the students. In conclusion, it is necessary to have
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 for students' post
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 hours. But at the same
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 it should not be an additional burden to them where it occupies entire
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 and energy doing it.

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