In some developing countries, it is difficult to get good teachers to work in rural areas which can have a negative impact on the education of children in those rural communities. Why do you think good teachers do not want to work in rural area in developing countries? What could be done to solve this problem?

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Education has become a basic necessity for the betterment and
upgradation
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of any country’s well-being. Unfortunately,
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sector has never been put into light as a major concern for the society’s welfare. Good teachers are reluctant to work in the rural area which are comparatively densely populated than the urban areas,
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decreasing the literacy rate of
third
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world countries. Reasons prior to
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question would be illustrated in the essay. It has been a long debate
since
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for
centuries to eliminate the class system in the society and equality should be promoted among all the citizens of a country. Teachers, as being the sole
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responsibility
to nourish the young generation, express their dissatisfaction in providing education to the rural communities and there are obvious reasons behind it.
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, these areas are deprived of the basic necessities of life
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as electricity, water supply, gas and transport to remote areas which would be the most crucial aspect for any good teacher from an urban area to survive without. The
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reason would be the problem of hygiene. As the rural citizens are not aware of cleanliness and do not pay heed to
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matter, it would prevent their children in acquiring quality education. The major obvious reason is the provision of low income
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for
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these hard-working teachers which they deserve for their dedication in making efforts to uplift children’s confidence and nurture their minds. Teachers should be given equal respect and importance as compared to the other professions because they provide a healthy support to the backbone of the economy. Millions are being funded by the powerful
countries but
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countries, but
not being invested to improve the conditions of the rural areas. High income should be allocated to the good teachers based on their experience and skills. Projects
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as USAID shall be promoted to provide high quality education to the remote underdeveloped communities.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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