Some people prefer shopping in shopping centres while others prefer weekend markets. What are the advantages of each? Which shopping experience do you prefer?

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It is often said that Sampheng Market has a lot of
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as easy-to-wear T-shirt
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comfortable skirt and smart jacket.
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Besides, we
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as delicious coconut
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, refreshing Fruit, yummy beef noodle
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various
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candies
, spicy papaya, mango with sweet sauces, cola
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coconut ice-cream
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rice
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Cheese French Fried and Orange juice. One of the most striking features is that we can do activities at Sampheng Market
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to say
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we can take
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pictures
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bueatyful
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beautiful
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variety foods
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peaceful place Chiness
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bright star
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nice moon
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and A lot people
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bicycle
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going sightseeing and railing with
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and sweeping the Streets. It is a well-known fact that we can
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supplies at Sampheng Market One instance could be because cheap stuff. Apart
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we can travel to market because of convenient travel.
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