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Obesity is a serious problen in many countries, especially in such countries discuss ways to solve the problems. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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In
this
 modern era where life of an individual is fully equipped with automation and technologies,
lot
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a lot
lots
 of people had gained weight. The primary reasons for
this
 obesity is the bad eating habits and stressful
work
-life balance. It is
therefore
 required to establish the reasons regarding
this
 alarming issue. In
this
 essay,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will be discussing some reasons with examples from developed and underdeveloped countries and the possible ways to rectify the same.
Firstly
, the professional and personal life imbalance among the individuals has resulted in the development of
stress which
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stress, which
 is topped with the loads responsibilities.
This
consequently make
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consequently makes
 the person lay emphasis on
work ignoring
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work, ignoring
 his/her diet and health and
this
 developing bad eating habits.
For example
, a study conducted at the university of human science, California shows that the individuals in the developed nations are more badly shaped in terms of their physique and eating habits. The major reason study shows is no physical exercise adapted in their routine and high stress level in their careers.
Secondly
,
their
in or at that place
there
 are many individuals who
stays
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stay
 at different
vaeinity
feelings of excessive pride
vanity
 away from their families for
work
 and education. Due to their routine and tight
work
 schedule, they find it really hard to cope with the discipline of eating healthy and
thus
 resulting into obese.
For example
, the university of Stanford, U.K conducted a survey to know the reasons for being overweight and concluded that strict
work
 schedule results into junky eating habits. To conclude,
this
 problem can be addressed by developing
positive attitude
Suggestion
a positive attitude
 and discipline among the daily routine before the obesity becomes pandemic.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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