Question: The best way to improve health is to do regular exercise. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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diet
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exercise
. While I agree that doing regular Use synonyms
exercise
is the key to enhance Use synonyms
health
, I believe that a healthy Use synonyms
diet
is Use synonyms
also
important.
On the Linking Words
one
Use synonyms
hand
, doing daily Use synonyms
exercise
is an easy Use synonyms
way
to enhance individual's Use synonyms
health
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, in terms of physical Linking Words
health
, people can build and maintain strong Use synonyms
muscle
and Use synonyms
bone
. In Use synonyms
fact
, during Use synonyms
exercise
daily, these exercises make burn calories and release hormone which promotes the ability of the Use synonyms
muscle
grow and build Use synonyms
bone
density. Use synonyms
Therefore
, it reduces the Linking Words
risk
of Use synonyms
health
problems Use synonyms
such
as stroke, Linking Words
heart
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disease
, obesity, etc. Use synonyms
Secondly
, in terms of mental Linking Words
health
, engaging in regular Use synonyms
exercise
really a wonder for relaxing and sleeping better. Use synonyms
This
is because, the energy dLinking Words
epletion which
occurs during Accept comma addition
depletion, which
exercise
; Use synonyms
therefore
, it stimulates a deeper sleep and have a mood better.
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On the other
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hand
, I firmly agree that a balanced Use synonyms
diet
iUse synonyms
s play
a critical in stepping toward a happy and healthy Suggestion
is playing
has played
plays
life
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, having a healthy Linking Words
diet
provides people with sufficient amount of nutrients, which can improve Use synonyms
health
for lUse synonyms
ong-term.
In Suggestion
the long-term
fact
, the prevalence of fast Use synonyms
food
and processed Use synonyms
food
is at a higher Use synonyms
risk
of Use synonyms
heart
diseases; Use synonyms
therefore
, people could make healthier Linking Words
food
choices which iUse synonyms
ncludes:
vitamins, mineral, Suggestion
include
health
fat. It ensured for immune system and. pUse synonyms
revent
transmission of virus and bacteria. Suggestion
Prevent
Moreover
, it is a principal weapon against some diseases: diabetes, Linking Words
heart
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disease
, high blood pressure. Use synonyms
Secondly
, eating well is able to create the feeling of well being. In Linking Words
fact
, according to some statistics, up to around 70% of people have a healthy Use synonyms
d
Use synonyms
iet which
lead to have a happy Accept comma addition
diet, which
life
and reduce depression or stress.
In brief, I believe that doing daily Use synonyms
exercise
is a good method to boost Use synonyms
health
, but I strongly agree that a healthy Use synonyms
diet
is Use synonyms
one
of the best Use synonyms
way
enhance Use synonyms
health
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