Write about the following topic: Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.

In today’s competitive world, c
omapanies
an institution created to conduct business
companies
a
re adopt
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are adopting
are adopted
so may s
tratagies
an elaborate and systematic plan of action
strategies
for their better profit and that’s why they adopted many advertising in different ways. Apart from that t
radition
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traditionally
use now c
ompnies
an institution created to conduct business
companies
use T
elivision,
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
televisions
R
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,
adio and most of the common way is internet for advertising.I tend to agree that some method of advertising adopted by companies a
re
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is
unethical and unacceptable. In the b
egining,
the event consisting of the start of something
beginning
w
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,
e can say t
hay
pointing out something
that
some of method of advertising are i
nfluence
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influencing
the people to buy unnecessary things.The main effect of advertising is on children.Children attract
firstly
about various things which they see in advertising and they force their p
arrents
a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parents
to buy for t
hemself.
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
Moreover
,
c
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,
ompanies h
ires
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hire
some celebrity for advertising.Because of that, indigenous people attract towards that thing.Some of advertising influence bad h
abbit
an established custom
habit
habits
o
n
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of
society while they waste their money on u
seless product.
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a useless product
useless products
In addition
, some advertisings are t
o
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
two
unethical like smoking and alcohol advertising.That type of advertising are b
an
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banned
in some countries.
This
type of advertising may bad effect on society while people tend to buy
t
his things
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these things
this thing
without think their own health.
Furthermore
,
c
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onsuming that unethical product may cause to physical problem.
On the other hand
,
a
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,
part from that u
naccepatable
not adequate to give satisfaction
unacceptable
t
hings
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thing
there are so many things which i
s
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are
ethical.Some p
roducts
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product
advertising a
re
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is
necessary for people to know what they are buying.Advertising
also
describe the quality of things.In my perspective, we have to understand what we are consuming.Because some product a
re
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is
detrimental f
or
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to
ourselves.So in my opinion,
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,
e can only know that things because of advertising.Having said that, advertising
also
c
reat
make or cause to be or to become
creates
e
mployement.
the state of being employed or having a job
employment
To sum up,
s
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,
ome unethical and unacceptable advertising c
reat
relatively large in size or number or extent; larger than others of its kind
great
negative effect on people and kids.In my way,
this
type of advertising should be banned by G
overment.
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the Government
Government

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