Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the worlds fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

A
modern dynamic
Accept comma addition
modern, dynamic
person cannot imagine his life without
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
by plane. Being one of the fastest and safest transports they provide
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
with a possibility to reach destinations in extremely short time with the maximum of safety and
convenient
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convenience
.
However
, the increase amount of
aircrafts
a vehicle that can fly
aircraft
in the sky leads to serious pollution and spending of
fuel
resources, which are supposed to be resolved by restriction of
air
travel. Personally, I strongly believe, that these issues could be resolved by
investment
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investing
in energy efficiency and state regulation of
fuel
resources. Government should subside the development of eco-friendly aircraft rather than restrict flights.
Such
solar power flying does not pollute the atmosphere so much since it does not emit carbon dioxide that makes him
acceptable mode
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the acceptable mode
an acceptable mode
of transport for
environment
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the environment
.
Moreover
, electric aircraft working
on
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in
the solar energy uses the electricity;
hence
the total cost of the flight should be significantly less.
As a result
, more people could afford travelling by plains for themselves,
for instance
.
Therefore
,
such
measures heading on the support of the eco-transport will positively affect both the environment and all the customers of
air flying industry
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the air flying industry
.
Furthermore
, establishment of standards for permissible removal of environmental components in accordance with environmental requirements could be preventive measures as well. Government should strictly regulate
this
sector of mining putting the limits and prices, which would replace the necessity to restrict the
numbers
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amount
of flight due to their pollution.
As a result
, the
air
industry will develop, and with it others,
for instance
, tourism.
Thus
, there would not be essential for the government to restrict the
air
travel. In conclusion,
although
the increasing amount of planes is the reason of
air
pollution and
fuel
depletion and the idea of restriction of flights is a key
for
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to
in
addressing
this
issue I strongly believe, that these measures are worthless. From my prospective, the best ways to solve these problems are development of solar powered
air
transport and state regulation of
fuel
resources.
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