Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

it
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It
is a fact that these days, the way people travel, purchase daily needs, talk to each other and their hobbies has been influenced by
technology
. There are several reasons for
such
a situation and few influences visible too. The way people interact using the
internet
and other social media had been changed by the latest innovation where in the past,
communication
had been done with the help of letters or by human messengers. Impact of
internet
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the internet
and other similar
communication
standards has been discussed in the following paragraphs. Out of all effects, the strongest one to indicate the switch in
communication
is the availability of the
internet
with all individuals. Most of the methodology used to share information
in
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on
past where slow,
in other words
, it requires days to pass the
message but
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message, but
with
help
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the help
of email, WhatsApp, Facebook and other similar platforms it is possible to convey
message
fast and in various possible ways by humans. One good example of
this
is now with the help of
modern innovation
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modern, innovative
modern innovative
voice and video
message
along with text
message
has been sent by people which was not possible in olden days.
However
, I would not overlook the effect on relationships people make with the help of
technology
. In an earlier time, the humans with which stay nearby or in the same town can be interacted by civics,
as a result
, most of the friends are from the same village or town.
On the other hand
, today it is
also
possible to interact with known or unknown folk over the
internet
and social media by mean of
technology
.
For example
, Friends from over overseas along with friends from my town and profession has been made by me on my Facebook account. So due to
innovations human
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innovations, human
can make
friends which
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friends, which
are might be not very well known for them and staying at far distance. All in all, the way
human
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humanity
interacts with each other and the type of bonding has been affected by various innovations. As far as my opinion is concerned, I believe it is one of the positive developments as it helps to develop
communication
between citizens of different countries. It is
also
believed that not just the interaction of the
relationship but
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relationship, but
choice, hobbies, method of selection and lifestyle of
individual
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individuals
the individual
an individual
will be affected by
technology
in
future
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the future
.
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  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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