Many doctors are concerned about the high use of computer games by children and young people. What mental and physical problems may arise from excessive use of these games? How could these problems be reduced?

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computer
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games especially by
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games, especially by
games especially of
games especially of of
children and young people. Excessive
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ofcomputer
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of computer
games may cause some problems.One of mental problems should be mentioned is
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a socialist
a socialism
.These people
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have
difficulties about relationship with others.
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weakness of communication abilities may influence people’s future success.Another mental issue I think is
agression
a disposition to behave aggressively
aggression
.Children who playing war
,
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fight games which are best-selling products in
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computer games’ market
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the computer games’ market
a computer games’ market
can be influenced by these games and become more aggressive.In additional to mental problems
,
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there are some physical issues.Playing more than enough
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games affect obesity and
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is one of the main problem of humanity at the moment.Some children and young people spend most of their day with playing games and do not act very much.
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causes obesity problems.
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highly
use
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of
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games may
weaken seeing
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weaken, seeing
ability
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the ability
of people’s eyes and people should take glasses for
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seeing
more exactly.People must pay attention to playing
computer
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games not more than enough. I think to reduce these problems parents should pay
attention their children
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attention to their children
.Maybe they can suggest playing
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games to their children as a reward.
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example when
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example, when
children doing his/her exercises parents may give
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the opportunity
an opportunity
to play games.
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Also parents
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Also, parents
can reduce issues with
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making
interest about playing outside
,
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some street games
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as football
,
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,
basketball and other games
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for
with
their children.When children play games which can be done outside become more steady and have not
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being abnormally tolerant to and dependent on something that is psychologically or physically habit-forming (especially alcohol or narcotic drugs)
addiction
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games rather than others.To engage in any sports in
childhold
the time of person's life when they are a child
childhood
may be more effective for escape from problems of highly
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of
computer
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games.
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conclusion
,
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,
it is clear that
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the main responsibility
about
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problems
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problem
is on the shoulders of parents. They should take into account
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for
future
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the future
and development of their children.

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