In some areas of the US, a “curfew” is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?

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In some regions of America, a “curfew” seems to be imposed,

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furthermore, it

has imposed in some family of Japan as my parents had done it for me. There are some pros and cons in

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that advantage and disadvantage in my view.

First

of all, I understood a “curfew” that parents or government imposed for

protect

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protecting

the children from dangerous issues when they are teenagers.

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is a good solution that avoids from the danger. There are a lot of social problems

such

as guns, drugs

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rapes and abduction case are frequently seen on NEWS.

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that is

very important as a discipline, because as teenager do not understand what is the bad effect or good effect in their life. The children would need educate from parents or school who know what are dangerous

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

or safety

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

However

, “curfew”at a certain age, like over-15-years-old it seems to undermine children’s freedom and trust as

young adult

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a young adult

young adults

. They understood that what is good or bad at the age, and parents would better

to trust

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trust

their children.

Moreover

, with parents having more control over their

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

, children will be more independent, think and act themselves. It

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will be

significantly to be an educated adult in the future. To sum up, in my opinion, it is sometimes very important that restricting children’s

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

as a discipline by their parents.

Although

, parents necessary to understand that to be respect to their children as a young adult over 15 years old.

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In some areas of the US, a “curfew” is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?

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Some people dislike change in their sociality and their own lives and want things to stay the same. *why do some people want things to say the same? *why should change be regarded as something positive?

Some people dislike change in their sociality and their own lives and want things to stay the same. why do some people want things to say the same? why should change be regarded as something positive?