In some areas of the US, a “curfew” is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?

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In some regions of America, a “curfew” seems to be imposed,

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furthermore, it

has imposed in some family of Japan as my parents had done it for me. There are some pros and cons in

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state

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am describing

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that advantage and disadvantage in my view.

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of all, I understood a “curfew” that parents or government imposed for

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protecting

the children from dangerous issues when they are teenagers.

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is a good solution that avoids from the danger. There are a lot of social problems

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as guns, drugs

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rapes and abduction case are frequently seen on NEWS.

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very important as a discipline, because as teenager do not understand what is the bad effect or good effect in their life. The children would need educate from parents or school who know what are dangerous

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behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

or safety

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behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

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, “curfew”at a certain age, like over-15-years-old it seems to undermine children’s freedom and trust as

young adult

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a young adult

young adults

. They understood that what is good or bad at the age, and parents would better

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trust

their children.

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, with parents having more control over their

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behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

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, children will be more independent, think and act themselves. It

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will be

significantly to be an educated adult in the future. To sum up, in my opinion, it is sometimes very important that restricting children’s

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behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

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as a discipline by their parents.

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, parents necessary to understand that to be respect to their children as a young adult over 15 years old.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

249 words

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In some areas of the US, a “curfew” is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?

Word Count

You need a website for your business, and you would like to ask your friend to build it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Include a brief description of your business Explain what you would like to have on the website Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.

Young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to work or study in cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the drawbacks?

In many countries, the amount of household waste like food packaging is increasing? What are the causes of this problem? What measurer could be taken to reduce it?

Since the 18th century technological advances have replaced people in the workplace. With today’s technology this process is happening at a greater rate. Technology is increasingly responsible for unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Discipline is a growing problem in modem schools. Some people think that parents should discipline their own children, while others think it should be the responsibility of the school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.