Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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an appraisal system

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from

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for

students to teachers, and

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has been a debatable issue whether

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evaluate or estimate the nature, quality, ability, extent, or significance of

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teacher

is reasonable or not. While some people argue that teachers are people who educate children so they do not have to be evaluated

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I contend that evaluating them must exert various progressive impacts on kids for following two

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The

first

compelling reason as to why I am supportive of appraisal is that

this

must have beneficial influence on pupils' growth. To be

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(sometimes followed by 'to') applying to or characterized by or distinguishing something particular or special or unique

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, evaluating

system

will cover the most fragile part of the

teacher

and

also

uses for

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, by which

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mean that children could design learning atmosphere of

they

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prefer.

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the story which is out of the major and waste study time, students could take action by using

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these systems

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. Even though

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might make

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professors

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depressed, school should implement

this

system

for all students The

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not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

reason that

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find is that

this

system

could prevent the worst case.

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with the instructors are

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reasons

for being to have significant belief from pupils and parents so they exert enormous influence on their pupils. To put it simply,

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the teacher

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could lead pupils in a negative way, which bring about

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the deteriorating situation

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, if

teacher

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the teacher

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have

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has

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the aggressive mindset

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and undesirable

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a complex mental state involving beliefs and feelings and values and dispositions to act in certain ways

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, students will follow how instructor act and how

teacher

think.

Therefore

, to avoid

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negative phenomenon

teacher

should be evaluated by pupils who in a formative

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period, which

could decide their future and parents who foster those children. In conclusion, regarding the issue of appraisal

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I believe that

this

is essential for

school

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schools

the school

to cultivate their students to be a decent adult based on several rationales mentioned above.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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