Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Nowadays, the increasing of school implements

appraisal

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an appraisal system

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students to teachers, and

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has been a debatable issue whether

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evaluate or estimate the nature, quality, ability, extent, or significance of

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is reasonable or not. While some people argue that teachers are people who educate children so they do not have to be evaluated

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I contend that evaluating them must exert various progressive impacts on kids for following two

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compelling reason as to why I am supportive of appraisal is that

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must have beneficial influence on pupils' growth. To be

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(sometimes followed by 'to') applying to or characterized by or distinguishing something particular or special or unique

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will cover the most fragile part of the

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uses for

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the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information

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the highest ranking position for a university academic

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the story which is out of the major and waste study time, students could take action by using

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. Even though

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might make

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professing to be qualified

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depressed, school should implement

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system

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for all students The

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not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

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find is that

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could prevent the worst case.

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with the instructors are

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reasons

for being to have significant belief from pupils and parents so they exert enormous influence on their pupils. To put it simply,

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teacher

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the teacher

a teacher

could lead pupils in a negative way, which bring about

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the deteriorating situation

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teacher

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the teacher

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has

aggresive mindset

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the aggressive mindset

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and undesirable

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a complex mental state involving beliefs and feelings and values and dispositions to act in certain ways

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, students will follow how instructor act and how

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think.

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, to avoid

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negative phenomenon

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should be evaluated by pupils who in a formative

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could decide their future and parents who foster those children. In conclusion, regarding the issue of appraisal

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I believe that

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is essential for

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schools

the school

to cultivate their students to be a decent adult based on several rationales mentioned above.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

296 words

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Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Include an introduction and conclusion

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

“By definition, charity is generosity in offering money, food, and help to the needy. To some people, such kindness should be boundless, others argue for a limit to it.” Which opinion do you support? In about 300 words, present your arguments.

Advances in health and biology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Doctors recommend that older people should get regular exercise. However many older people do not take enough exercise. What could be the reason for this? What can be done to encourage them to take exercise?