Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, the increasing of school implements
appraisal
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an appraisal system
system
from
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for
students to teachers, and
this
has been a debatable issue whether
evealuating
evaluate or estimate the nature, quality, ability, extent, or significance of
evaluating
evaluation
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teacher
is reasonable or not. While some people argue that teachers are people who educate children so they do not have to be evaluated
,
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,
I contend that evaluating them must exert various progressive impacts on kids for following two
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rations
The
first
compelling reason as to why I am supportive of appraisal is that
this
must have beneficial influence on pupils' growth. To be
spesific
(sometimes followed by 'to') applying to or characterized by or distinguishing something particular or special or unique
specific
, evaluating
system
will cover the most fragile part of the
teacher
and
also
uses for
comunitation
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
, by which
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
mean that children could design learning atmosphere of
they
objective case of they
them
prefer.
For example
, at the university, if
professer
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professor
professors
tell
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tells
the story which is out of the major and waste study time, students could take action by using
these
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this system
these systems
system
. Even though
this
might make
professer
professing to be qualified
professed
professors
professor
depressed, school should implement
this
system
for all students The
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
reason that
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
find is that
this
system
could prevent the worst case.
To begin
with the instructors are
reason
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reasons
for being to have significant belief from pupils and parents so they exert enormous influence on their pupils. To put it simply,
teacher
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the teacher
a teacher
could lead pupils in a negative way, which bring about
deteriorate situatioin
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the deteriorating situation
deteriorate situation
deteriorating situation
deteriorating situatioin
.
For instance
, if
teacher
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the teacher
a teacher
have
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has
aggresive mindset
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the aggressive mindset
aggressive mindset
and undesirable
atitude
a complex mental state involving beliefs and feelings and values and dispositions to act in certain ways
attitude
, students will follow how instructor act and how
teacher
think.
Therefore
, to avoid
this
negative phenomenon
teacher
should be evaluated by pupils who in a formative
period which
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period, which
could decide their future and parents who foster those children. In conclusion, regarding the issue of appraisal
system
,
Accept space
,
I believe that
this
is essential for
school
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schools
the school
to cultivate their students to be a decent adult based on several rationales mentioned above.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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