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one of the best way to solve worlds environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel prices. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the problems associated with the negative impact of imprudent human activities that become a great concern for many. Few sections of society think that government should raise the price of fuel to alleviate the environmental problems. My perspective is that, increasing fuel price will help to some extent, there are other vital solutions which are equally useful. The essay will decipher various reasons for my standpoint. It seems that, cars, motorbike, road traffic is the main source of greenhouse gases, urban air pollution and responsible for global warming. It is evident that, if government slightly hike the cost of gasoline and petrol, it could impact on people’s income and saving.
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, vehicle owners will decrease the uses of their personal transport which helps to reduce pollution. To illustrate, to solve the environmental problems, Singapore has added a huge amount of taxes on gas prices.
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 has deterred locals from using their own vehicle.
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, expansion in fuel value will benefit at a certain limit to decline the environment problems.
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, there are
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 other way to deal with
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 issue. One major option is to provide a robust public transport system and provide subsidy for residents who use it. If occupants have the alternative to commute via buses and trains which are cheaper and comfortable, they will start using them on a regular basis.
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, London has a huge network of trains and buses, which are quite affordable.
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 locals prefer ton use them
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 of their private vehicles.
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, it will result in fewer cars on the road, which eventually means less defilement. To conclude, environmental issues can be controlled by raising the prices of gas;
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, another measure like providing efficient public transport and subsidy for residents could be equally beneficial in combating
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 issue.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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