Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Today, misunderstanding about the contrast between

competition

and cooperation has become a challenging subject. Teamwork and competing have their own fans in

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topic. In

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essay, I will discuss the perspectives of these outlooks on different parts of our

life

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, namely in our occupation career, at school, and in our daily routine. And

then

, I

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intend to propose the importance of competing

than

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rather than

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cooperating. There are many reasons that explain why the cooperating view does not seem to be

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in all

situation

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.

Firstly

, we should always remember what is the main aim of our work, and not let our selected purpose be affected by meeting the needs of others in the same way.

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, in a

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market

in

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which

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you strive to be the best in

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the aspect

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aspect

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of both quality and

financially

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. it means more energy and time had been consumed by you to consider all aspects

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success ,when they only were focused on

one

thing like financial matters.

as

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a result in

this

competition

,cooperation

whith

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with

those who are your

rival

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in

market

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the market

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doesn't matter at all.

Furthermore

,about taking exams at school,

.some

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some

student

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students

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believe that cheating in exams is a kind of empathy and cooperation.

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It would be acceptable to focus only on your own exam, not on your classmate who was playing when you were studying hard for

this

competition

.

Moreover

, in daily

life

, depending on the subjects or problems you should always

trying

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to do your best for your family

instead

of others. It doesn't mean you will not help

neighbors

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,It means your own should be prioritized as the first priority.

for

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example in a

competion

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competition

of

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the best designs for Halloween it is really good to help your

neighbors

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but

until

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when your chance to become the first

one

doesn't be limited.it is

preference

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a preference

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for winning the

competition

.

In contrast

, many claim that teamwork has proven as the potential way to achieve the best result and always people should

place

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more value on collaboration

instead

of

competition

.

For example

, they claim that when a student is helping his or her classmate , generosity and empathy defeat

competition

.

However

,helping is a kind of empathy and should be encouraged but in my opinion, the main goal of our commitment like academic or work commitments, is trying to be the best

one

through

competition

. It is reasonably acceptable that

while

you are helping others to solve their mistakes you should be ambitious to be the best

one

And

this

forces you to account yourself for being in a

competition

.

To sum up

, with a simple overview, you can find many considerations that take strong steps to demonstrate

life

is a

competition

too. All rewards and encouragements go to the best student or best staff or maybe the best family ,which is why motivated people are going to be more competitive. As a matter of fact,

life

is like a race and you should run to achieve the best.