There is no need to go out to see live performance (concert...) because it is better to see them on the TV or Computer screen. Do you agree or disagree

An emerging trend that has generated a widespread phenomenon in the entertainment industry is watching

movies

at home. Taking all the convenience into account, I am inclined to believe that watching

movies

on personal screens is much better than seeing

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staged performances. Not only will watching

movie

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at home help us to save our precious time, but it can

also

be a private area to enjoy

TV

series. To look at the entertainment aspect, the most important factor to consider is the daily form of recreation. If a person is using some private applications, or browsing websites

while

relaxing against some pillows with the

TV

playing in the background,

instead

of

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going direct to the social cinema, it will be one of the best options for their budget.

Such

forms of entertainment,

moreover

, will create a private space for us to watch wonderful

movies

without irritating others intensely. Another point that needs to be taken into consideration is that the more people are around, the more bad emotional feelings we will get. Even though it is true that we always find confidence and truly

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whenever we can gather with friends or family members, which can be ruined

while

watching in the social cinema with strangers. In order to avoid

this

situation, all we need to do is be on our own, find a great

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show and relax. With that being said,

however

, everything always has its defective sides and

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is pretty true

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home-movie

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watching. What really makes the audience truly bored with the film is

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distraction.

For example

, assuming a person is watching his favourite movie, he might be momentarily distracted by social media platforms

such

as Facebook, Instagram or even the notification of messages which is pretty unpleasant.

Due to

the fact that watching

movies

in our private area can affect negatively our routine, we might

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immersed in blockbuster

movies

or

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series and

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lazy.

In addition

, the blue light of computer screens will cause some contemporary symptoms

such

as eye strain,

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vision or headache. In conclusion, watching

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movie

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is on the rise, and watching

movies

on

computer

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trend brings both advantages and disadvantages to

our self

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and

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others. Moderation is the key to

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balance and

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these problems effectively.