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Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?

#diet #meat #health
People should stick to a
meat
-free
diet
 because the high consumption of
meat
 can
cause
 severe illnesses and damage to the human body.
Although
this
 topic has been controversial lately
.
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.
However
,
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,
 I believe that being
meat
 free isn't the ideal solution for
health
 issues. Being vegetarian can be a better alternative
diet
 for both our physical
health
 and our
planet but
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planet, but
 it couldn't be without its own risks.
first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
 of all
,
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,
sticking to
meat
-free
diet
 can lead to low
vitamin
 D
.
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.
although
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Although
vitamin
 d can come from plant based sources,
however
 a certain type of
vitamin
 D (
vitamin
 D3) can only come through
meat
 based diets or balanced diets.
Second
,
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,
 calcium and iron levels will drop down eventually. Low iron levels could
cause
anemia
a deficiency of red blood cells
anaemia
 which is highly experienced by vegans and vegetarians.
In addition
 to physical problems
,
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,
vegetarians
also
 are highly affected
with
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by
 being exposed to mental issues more than
meat
 eaters.
Finally
,
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,
 the rate of experiencing digestion problems is
high
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higher
 among vegetarians.In spite of
health
 problems caused by
meat
-free
diet it
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diet, it
 doesn't mean that it is bad for short terms.
However
, it can
cause
 future problems if stuck to for a long term.
On the contrary
,
meat
 is essential in a balanced
diet
. It has high amounts of nutrients
such
 as fibre, protein and calcium are found in
meat
 which is extremely essential to keep a person energetic throughout the day.
Moreover
,
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,
meat
 has many benefits that serve the human body.
To begin
 with, a non vegetarian
diet
 can help in blood sugar control
,
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,
bone strength, and muscle maintenance.
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In
 addition
,
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,
meat
 is the only natural source of
Vitamin
B12 which
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B12, which
 helps
in
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with
 brain function and development.
Although
 it can
cause
 some
health
 problems when being cooked in the wrong way it helps increase a person's immune system. Despite its importance, it
alsoalso
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also also
 tastes so good. To recapitulate, both
meat
 and
meat
-free
diet
 can
cause
 different
health
 issues if consumed on a long-term period. I highly disagree with
this
 notion. I believe that converting to a vegetarian
diet
 is not better because every
diet
 has both its advantages and disadvantages. Sticking to a balanced
diet
 is the ideal solution.

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