Some high school required all student to wear school uniform other higher school permit student to decide what to wear to school.which of these school policies you think is better?

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Secondly
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there are a number of junior in class who are not so much
intelligent so
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intelligent, so
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when they wear
uniform
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uniforms
they never feel low it make them more confident.If students and
educators both
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educators, both
wear other clothes rather than school
uniform
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uniform, then
then
how other people define teachers.In many schools
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schoolchild
want
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wants
to copy the other students if they wear any clothes it
also
affect the culture
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For instance
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India according
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India, according
to experts
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about 60% students who want to copy western culture.
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scholars can away from their culture and lost their identity. In the end
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children ought to wear
uniform
in school so that other children
also
want to go to school when they see them in
uniform
and
uniform
is
a
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an
identity of the student.
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