It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subject. 🔻What are causes? 🔻How can this situation be improved?

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An unprecedented number
Unprecedented numbers
of
revolutinizing
change radically
revolutionizing
in the field of studying subjects has
transfirmed
given a completely different form or appearance
transformed
the way of people choosing
future
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job. In the background of
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course and events, many
science
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students are becoming rare in todays life.
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, lack of financial incentives and difficulties can be a root
couses
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cause
causes
of
this
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issue and with rising salaries in mind government can easily tackle
this
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problem easily,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe. Difficulties to cope with
science
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subjects and lack of
salary
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are the two main root
couses
give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally
causes
of
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cancern
be relevant to
concern
cancer
consent
. The former
one
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,
stydents
a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
students
always find
hardicapt
incapable of functioning as a consequence of injury or illness
handicapped
to learn
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learning
science
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subjects as they are
extreamily
to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
extremely
challanging
requiring full use of your abilities or resources
challenging
and often students who
wont
feel or have a desire for; want strongly
want
went
wants
to study
scinese
from that time
since
science
synapse
need some inborn talent and patience. The latter
one
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is no doubt
deficency
the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable
deficiency
of
salary
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which is
one
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of the main
factor
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factors
to
encougrage
contribute to the progress or growth of
encourage
student to study
scinese
a particular branch of scientific knowledge
science
subjects. Despite the fact that they are
dufficult
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
.
Researchers
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Researchers'
findings about 'the factors of choosing subjects' in the UK showed that around 70% of young students choose subjects due to its
future
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job as well as
salary
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and
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could be a good example here. Notwithstanding,
optimum
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optimal
solution could be
seperating
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separate
separating
separation
schools from ordinary schools. To be more precise, there should be social subjects based schools which are based on teaching
this
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subjects more
houres
a period of time assigned for work
hours
harsh
horses
in contrast
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with ordinary schools and
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should be applied in high schools
also
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.
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of these students who want to choose
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sciense
a particular branch of scientific knowledge
science
scenes
subjects in
ths
definite article
the
future
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will make students well
avare
(sometimes followed by 'of') having or showing knowledge or understanding or realization or perception
aware
of them. The
second
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outcome could be rising salaries for
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future job
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a future job
connected with
science
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subjects. Targeting
at
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of
increasing number of students who show their
intelegance
the ability to comprehend; to understand and profit from experience
intelligence
at
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sciense
a particular branch of scientific knowledge
science
sciences
subjects, government should increase payments for them in the
future
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. A
stricking
sensational in appearance or thrilling in effect
striking
example could
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example, could
be Russia and the USA here. In Russia there is
lack
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a lack
the lack
of students who study
science
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nowdays
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
because of very low
salary
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.
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, in the USA
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sciense
from that time
since
people paid a lot and many youngs are engaged in studying
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sciense
a particular branch of scientific knowledge
science
. To conclude, low
salary
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and
difficulties
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the difficulties
of studying
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sciense
a particular branch of scientific knowledge
science
scenes
sciences
are the main causes of
this
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problem.
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Therefore there
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Therefore, there
are some good ways to solve
this
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issue. Government should rise
salary
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and
separat
give moral or psychological support, aid, or courage to
support
schools as a
science
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based
one
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, in my opinion.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Lack of
  • Interest
  • Motivation
  • Perceived
  • Difficulty
  • Complexity
  • Limited
  • Career opportunities
  • Science field
  • Inadequate
  • Resources
  • Facilities
  • Education
  • Ineffective
  • Teaching methods
  • Uninspiring
  • Curriculum
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