A recent newspaper article discussed the threat of technology taking over our homes and lives. You think that the views expressed in the article were one-sided and have decided to write a letter to the editor. You want to highlight the benefits of technology in our daily lives

Dear editor, I am writing

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letter in response to your article about the usage of technology

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our daily lives, on the grounds that only negative effects were taken into account. As

such

, I decided to express my stand on the topic As the article correctly pinpointed, it is true that recent advances

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scientific research allowed technology to improve by leaps and bounds, so as to shrink the dimension of

devices

of every kind while increasing their potentialities. It comes as no surprise that the

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of

such

commodities at our disposal increased at dizzying speed, endowing our houses with

devices

of every sort. What I found ludicrous,

however

, is the inaccurate depiction of

such

, as the article names it, technological flood. Whilst it is true that a chunk of the population, particularly the elderly, found their lives impinged by the onset of

smartphone

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and tablets,

this

only stands as a stark example of the inability of

such

people to adapt to

this

brand-new reality, which is all but deleterious. In fact, not only are these

devices

conceived as a means to facilitate us overcoming the hurdles posed by the daily grind

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but should we use them conscientiously, we would even suss out their fundamental utility in smoothing out problems in our way to achieve what we desire. Were one to look at the bright side, the enormous wealth of information disclosed by the onset of the internet , allowed everyone to achieve objectives previously deemed far from their grasp. All things considered, there is mounting evidence of the rise of smartphone addiction amongst the younger generation,but the blame is to be put on the behaviour of people

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technology in itself. In fact,only by curbing the unnecessary time spent on these

devices

will we be able to really benefit from their usage. Regards.