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Computers have their advantages and disadvantages.

#computers
Today we can't live without computers. In my opinion using computers may be useful and sometimes unhelpful.
Computer
Suggestion
The computer
A computer
 isn't only used for personal purpose
that
is mostly
Suggestion
is mostly used
use
 in the organisations. They
use
 it to make a report.
Moreover
, we can easily get any information by using computers. It makes our life easier. The
use
 of
computer
 puts a world at a different height. But every coin has two
side
Suggestion
sides
, in that way
use
 of
computer
Suggestion
the computer
computers
 has some advantages and
also
 disadvantages. Many people
use
 computers for negative purpose. They play games and chat for a long time. That causes wastage of time.
Besides
, most
computer
 programs include grammar check, and students might depend on the
computer
 to correct their mistakes. To sum up we can
use
 computers for
good or bad goal
Suggestion
the good or bad goal
. It depends on us. If we
use
 computers for good aim, it's better for us.

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