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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

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Some would argue that children should be taught how to become good citizens in
society
 by their parents, while others say that the best place to learn
this
 is actually at school.
Although
 parents are role models
of
Suggestion
for
 their children, I believe that educating them at school is a better option. On the one hand, the way that parents teach children can be very effective because most of the children consider their parents as role models.
That is
 to say, in their minds, their parents are the best people in the whole
society
 and they want to be like their parents.
Therefore
, compared with other people’s words, they tend to listen to their parents’ suggestions more carefully.
For example
, a recent study at Frankfurt University in Germany showed that more than 35% of children whose parents were doctors or nurses would be more willing to do some medical-related jobs in their future than those whose parents worked in other industries.
However
, I believe that sometimes children rebel against what their parents say especially in their adolescence.
On the other hand
, the way that schools teach children how to be a good person is
the better
Suggestion
the best
 choice because schools can provide them with systematic learning.
That is
 to say, schools can provide children with some courses and voluntary organizations so that they can learn about what is a good citizen in
society
 and how to become a good one.
For example
, in the USA some secondary schools created charitable organizations where their students could donate money to help others. I believe that
this
 method is preferable because it benefits individuals and
society
 as a whole. In conclusion,
although
 parent’s teaching is very effective because parents are the
first
 teacher from whom children can learn, teenagers’ rebellion can harm
this
 and
that is
 why school’s teaching is more important because they can learn and practice at the same time.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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