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Some people thinks that watching news is good for individuals and some thinks not . discuss both views and also give poinion

#people #news #individuals #poinion
Watching
news
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the news
 is good for individuals and some
thisnks
judge or regard; look upon; judge
thinks
 not. In my opinion, social media is good for some
people because, we
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people, because we
can to know
Suggestion
can know
 something new for myself,
also
 a lot information on TV can be helpful for people.
For instance
,
Accept space
,
 Information
such
 as tv
show
,
Accept space
,
 regarding
helth
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
, news in the world, even cooking tv
show
. People are self-developing. For other hand, news can influence badly for people.
For example
,
Accept space
,
 any political news from other country. Social can be in
confusing situation
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a confusing situation
confusing situations
. I can explain
this
 situation
,
Accept space
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 am from Ukraine
.
Accept space
.
 In my country political situation is not stable. On the
east
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eastern
 Ukraine now is war, and people don't know is
enemy
Suggestion
the enemy
an enemy
 and
agains
in contact with
against
 whom they are fighting. News in Ukraine
show
Suggestion
shows
 us enemy is Russia. Because President of Russia wants to take east Ukraine,
such
 as he conquered Cremia island from Ukraine. In Russia's news
show
russian
of or pertaining to or characteristic of Russia or its people or culture or language
Russian
 people opposite. In conclusion, yellow social media
such
 as not
trully
in accordance with truth or fact or reality
truly
 news
,
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,
 the are doing
this
 for
piar
free of extraneous elements of any kind
pure
 and to make a money. I believe, maybe in a future people will live in
piece
the state prevailing during the absence of war
peace
, and we will see only true news.

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