rite about the following topic: Memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

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Although

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formulation of the plans and important details

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chromium

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is considered as the most significant part of studies to achieve desired goals

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ersonally, disagree with

this

as education is not about the rote learning only. There are various reasons for my disagreement with the o

bove

at a higher position than

above

notion. The preponderant is

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to get good score in any subject,

one

has to understand the concepts behind the facts

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o elucidate, if a student would c

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move toward, travel toward something or somebody or approach something or somebody

come

only f

acts

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facts, then

then

probably he may s

tuck

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stick

in the exam because of moulded questions.

On the other hand

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if s

tudent

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a student

the student

knows the actual concepts of the topic

then

he could answer any question r

ealted

being connected either logically or causally or by shared characteristics

to the given topic. I

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the subject of Mathematics,

for example

, learners are e

nforces

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enforced

to cram the t

ables but

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tables, but

it happened many times that children are not able to do f

uther

to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)

further

multiplications as they do not understand the logic behind tables. Resultantly; they failed to solve multiplication beyond tables they c

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crowd or pack to capacity

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already.

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, deep understanding is the only thing that leads to success in a

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rote learning has very short life span

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s proved

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is proven

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by many studies that memorised facts remain in memory for a short t

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time, but

on the other hand

, if they a

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are understood

are understanding

are to understand

well logically the effect is long lasting.

For example

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them. At the same time, if he u

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understands

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fanatics

genetics

phonetics

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representation, then

then

surely, it r

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any object that is left unused or still extant

remains

in his everlasting memory as it has been proven that

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human mind learn things much faster with s

ubconscious mind.

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the subconscious mind

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earing

the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge

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should never depend on c

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In conclusion, to get success in academics

one

should rely on understanding and concept clearence

instead

of rote learning

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

301 words

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