Many museums today are mainly visited by tourist, not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people?
Many people find out that the main visitors of the museums are the tourists
instead
of local people. The first
reaction to some people is to oppose such
claims. Nonetheless
, from my points of views, there are several persuasive reasons to agree with this
statement. In the following paragraphs, there are a number of perspectives to examine this
issue more in depth.
The main reason to support my position is that the tickets are too expensive to afford by normal families to go visiting regularly. Take my friend, Tina, for example
, the ticket's price of the art center
which is nearby her living area is 50 USD per person. Her salaries is 30 USD every day, so that she could only go visiting once a year. From an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
such
examples, it demonstrates that if the government could provide some discounts for locals, it may attract more people.
Another reason for my belief is that nowadays the art exhibitions are focus
on ancient antiques. Suggestion
focused
However
, civilians are more care
about some things are related to themselves. Suggestion
more careful
For instance
, my sister, Jane, she used to love antiques. But now she has an
one-year-old boy, she told me she are not interested in ancient world anymore. Suggestion
a
On the other hand
, she is looking for an art center
which provides playgrounds for parents and kids. an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
Consequently
, it can be said that if the exhibitions could have some more different perspectives, and it may attract more families.
To conclude, it is not to say that other points of views are totally without merits. Nevertheless
, the reasons I have presented could support the position of why there are fewer neighbors
to visit the museums and how the government could do in order to improve a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
such
situations.Submitted by jenny1126 on
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