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Many student choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Taking a
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 is a common activity for many students around the world. Taking a
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year
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 to go travelling or gain more experience before going to university. But, is it a good idea to take a
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year
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 or it is just a waste of time? In the following essay, I will say my opinion about
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 question. Taking a
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 going to give you time to pursue your passion and may give you the opportunity to work as yo
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 dream work. If you spend your
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 travelling, you may probably need to find out how to manage your finances, it could give you a wealth of cultural awareness and a profound ability to live and work independently. And the life experience you have learned can make you better prepared for university. But taking a
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 still have its disadvantages if you’re not using it in a good way. Like if you enjoy too much and forget to learn, you risk losing your academic momentum. And after you go back to study, you will be a
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 behind others. And it could be very costly if you are wasting a lot of cash on your expenses. In my opinion, students should take a
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 and use it wisely to get as much knowledge as possible or to discover their career interest
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 allows them to consolidate their finances.
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, taking a
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 or not depends on each student, they can go straight to university if they want to.
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