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Some people say that E-News and Modern Technology wil totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree ?

#people #e-news #technology #newspaper #magazines
In today's world,
technology
 is increasing day by day with the help of
technology we
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technology, we
 get
latest news
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the latest news
 and current affairs easily.
However
, most of the people believe in conventional
newspaper
. But today's generation believes that in few years
newspaper
 will disappear. But I do not completely assent about
this
, because
newspaper
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the newspaper
 is
cheapest and easiest way
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a cheapest and easiest way
the cheapest and easiest way
 to get news. There are multiple reasons for choosing
newspaper
, no coma full stop
First
 of all, Many people have a daily routine of reading
newspaper
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the newspaper
a newspaper
 in
morning
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the morning
 with tea or coffee. By merely seeing two-three pages we can get news about present global activities. Anyone can carry newspapers with their bag, whether it's affluent or middle class. We can get some interesting attachments with
newspaper
-like, Fashion, Culinary skills, and Astrology. On
other hand
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the other hand
,
Technology
provide
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provides
 provides news with realistic videos, we can download it and share it with our relatives and others. And with modern
technology we
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technology, we
 get
fast faster
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fast, faster
 news than newspapers. To Conclude,
This
 modern
technology
 can be a new form of
news but
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news, but
 in my perspective, there is no threat to
newspaper
 because it’s conventional and still it’s the easiest form of getting news.
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