Many people join distance-learning programs (studys material, post, TV, İnternet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending collages or universities does. Do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays more and more online
people
take part distance
education to study any programs from their home. Change preposition
in distance
However
, some people
argue that it is not usefulfor
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useful for
students
who attending
universities or Wrong verb form
attend
collages
. I agree that Correct your spelling
colleges
students
see earlier benefit
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benefits
who
using Correct word choice
when
a
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apply
distance
learning like those who going
to the Change the form of the verb
go
course
. There are new ways to study such
as online course
. Studying using new methods Fix the agreement mistake
courses
such
as either through Correct article usage
the internet
internet
or online courses would be Capitalize word
Internet
benefit
for Replace the word
beneficial
people
. Firstly
, students
do not have to pay tution
fees, textbook fees and tutorial fees and they save their budget. Correct your spelling
tuition
Secondly
,Add an article
the
course
would be possible with Fix the agreement mistake
courses
help
of good speed internet Correct article usage
the help
that
is Correct pronoun usage
which
much
cheaper option nowadays. Add an article
a much
Moreover
, the students
are not travelling long distance
like Fix the agreement mistake
distances
countryside
, Add an article
the countryside
while
the college is in the midle
of a city. Correct your spelling
middle
Finally
, if they participate in the online course
both they
brain Correct pronoun usage
their
developing
and their Replace the word
development
sorround
is expanding. They make Correct your spelling
surround
surrounds
foregin
friends, Correct your spelling
foreign
therefore
, it is broadened Correct pronoun usage
their horizon
horizon
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horizons
them
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
İn
addition, when they join Correct your spelling
In
distance
learning they manage their time. Thus
, they have no waste of time in the ways. Definetely
, Correct your spelling
Definitely
this
option is not possible in a traditional study. On the contrary
, others have the
conflicting views. As per them, going to the Correct article usage
apply
course
is the best method to
learning as Change preposition
of
students
can learn very well face to face with their teachers. Moreover
, theacher
can correct and guide their mistakes to overcome all the problems. In Correct your spelling
the teacher
conclude
, Replace the word
conclusion
although
face-to-face education is the best method for some people
, in my opinion
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opinion,
dostance
learning Correct your spelling
distance
are
basic Correct subject-verb agreement
is
of
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for
future
. Correct article usage
the future
Thus
, I still argue distance
learning is better
option.Add an article
a better
the better
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